Rohit, are you ready?
No da, I don’t have my kit!
I thought you had a full set!
I did. Raman borrowed it from me and hasn’t returned it yet!
What! How could you be so irresponsible?
No Machan, he had to have it and would return it by tonight!
You are a fool! If he doesn’t, we are stumped even before the battle!
No da. Raman will never let me down! See, there he comes now!
Rohit, here is your cricket kit. I knew you had an important match tomorrow. So I didn’t even wait for my victory lap!
*Cricket is a great passion in India and youngsters spend many a holiday challenging each other to matches. A win in it is almost like winning the Olympics! Most players and teams have their own kit consisting bats, pads and stumps. Many are sentimental about their kit consisting of bat, pads and stumps. They feel they won’t win without their own kit. Machan actually means brother-in-law in Tamil and is used to address one another denoting close friendship!
*Friday Fictioneers is talented group of enthusiasts penning down a story, a poem, a prose, etc., expressing their heart about a photo prompt, every week. Thanks for this weekโs photo prompt ยฉ Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
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Dear Sabina,
Greater love hath no man than to lay down his victory lap for a friend. ๐ Sweet story of friendship.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you. You have caught on to the simple core of the tale!๐๐๐๐
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Ha ha – this was a great take on the photo prompt! Well done.
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Always nice when a friend comes through – no matter what Da says!
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Thanks for the insight into Indiaโs love of cricket, this is a nice take on the prompt!
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A very realistic story. I can picture him waiting eagerly so he can go and start playing.
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Yes! We all should have that one Person!
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Thanks for that, especially the explanatory note.
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Nice to have the insights to cricket in India
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Nice story to illustrate India’s passion for cricket!
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Three things I’d never let anyone borrow – my bike, my pen and my cricket bat. Rohit should take note.
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Yep!๐
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Nothing worse than being stumped when playing cricket, especially if you are batting. Nice one
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Nice lateral take.
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As AB says a wonderful lateral take.
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Thank you!
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Your notes always help make the story come more clear. Even without the notes, though, this was full of heart and hope ๐
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I have a friend from Barbados who is a cricket fan. We baseball nuts feel the same way about our gloves, bats, etc. I would have been very upset if my wife had loaned mine without my permission.
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And brotherly love! Thank you!๐
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A lovely take on the prompt and a delightful read.
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I’m glad Raman didn’t let him down!
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Sweet story.
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Love itโฆ have noticed how cricket has been growing lately in Swedenโฆ so maybe it will come here too.
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Thank you!
Btw, where do you live please?
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I live in Stockholm Sweden… and cricket is growing a lot because of the many young men from Pakistan and Afghanistan coming here I think… We have no cricket tradition whatsoever… ๐
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Wow! That’s nice. I work online for a Swedish Company Conevo AB India office as content writer. My client is noden.se and I post Asian News every week.
Plus I am named after my father’s Swedish godmother Helena. His parents, my grandparents, worked for Swedish Mission Hospital in Tirupattur, S.India. She was missionary doctor there. We used be blessed with goodies from Sweden. My first sweater, green in colour, was from there. I still remember it!
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Amazing… I work for another Swedish company with many employees in India… Ericsson.
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Glad his friend came through for him!
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