Life is just a wheel, they say, Turning round and round, on its way, None can escape its relentless sway, Except to flow in its constant play. Life is a circle, they say, Events return the same with each lay, Nothing seems to change, day by day, Monotony is consistent in each tale. Life is just a turn, they say, Yet, there's a difference in every fray, Bit by bit, you move along the fairway, Till you reach your goal, the freeway!
*Friday Fictioneers is talented group of enthusiasts penning down a story, a poem, a prose, etc., expressing their heart about a photo prompt, every week. Thanks for this weekβs beautiful photo promptΒ Β© Ted Strutz
I really like your light verses here – the word delightful came to mind. And then still thinking about the ending stanza with that ending goal of the freeway – hm
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oh and I wish I did not read this before I wrote my fiction piece – because now I want to write in verse. ahhhh –
but i will get back to what I was working on.,…
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Beautiful.
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So true.
Happy 2018!
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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So cute. Thank you!
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Thank you. Wish you the same!
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Beautiful take on the prompt
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Dear Sabina,
Our lives are made of cycles and circles aren’t they? Nicely written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you!π
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Wheely like the swaying feel to this, spicedmullings.
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Yes Rochelle. But rotatory motions is not static, but contributes to the translational movement – ,just like the wheel!
Thank you!π
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We are creatures of habit and love familiarity. The important thing is to not let it turn into a rut that we can’t escape. Nice poem, Spice.
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Really nice poem about the turnings of life. All life is a circle, sometimes in concentric waves that waft out and touch other circles… Love the story!
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Indeed… that constant motion that goes on and on, until the day it ends.
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Thank you!π
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Thank you πππ
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Thank you v much!π
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Yep! Thank you π
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Philosophical thoughts on a sculpture. Nicely done π
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Lovely.
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THANK YOU!
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End of the year and all that…!π
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Good rhythm.
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Thank you!
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I enjoyed this poem, Sabina. Good writing. π — Suzanne
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Thank you!
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