FADE IN, FADE OUT, FOCUS
Junk all around, you shudder.
Worse still a toilet, you mutter.
Don’t they have anything better,
You wonder, you stutter.
Fade out, fade in, focus
Ah now I see!
Blue beauties, yellow pretties, green greens!
What to mull, what to write
Beauty or beast, junk or jazz!
A choice to make, a stance to take
A lesson to learn, a moral to make
An eye to see, a heart to perceive!
I choose the present over the past
I see that the best is often yet to be!
Dear Sabina,
Nice rhyme with a good message. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Appreciate your approval. I just joined in and feel so encouraged!
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Nice Poem. I like the message too. Nicely done.
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Nice take on the prompt!
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Thanks Dale for taking time to encourage. God bless!
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Thanks ansumani for your gracious comment. GB!
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I so love this. So clever and original. I love the progression in the narrator’s perspective.
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Many thanks gahlearner. You have agrasped the flow of my thoughts! GB
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from disgust to hope, good take!
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Thank you oldentimes!
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