The ferry loomed before them, just across the huge gantry-type barricade, their transport to all they hoped to have. They just needed to cross the border customs check and they would be safe.
They waited in queue, watching the officials check the car ahead. With every passing minute, their trepidation mounted. They had waited a long time for this and saved every penny for life ahead.
The officials waved the car on and paused to confer, a brief respite in their busy work stream.
They beckoned to them, eyeing them making their way down the wet road.
“Your passports, please.”
Dear Sabina,
Tension mingled with hope. You left me wondering what will happen next. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you! Appreciate it!
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Indeed we did think alike. I liked your take too.
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Talk about a cliff-hanger π
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Will we get the next episode next week?
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Thank you!π
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Don’t know. I rather leave it a mystery and to your imagination!πππ
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More fun and intrigue that way. Sorry!π
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I felt the tension – well done.
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Oh dear, I hope everything’s in order and they can continue
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I fear that they might not make it onto the ferry!
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I too!
Thank you π
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Hope so!
Guess its our prayer!
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Maybe! Maybe not!
Thank you!π
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Imagine your own end. The true pleasure of flash. Lovely.
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Thank you!
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Well done! I’m sure they make it, because sometimes good triumphs. :o)
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I think everything is in order… still a moment of tension…
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Thank you! I just wanted to leave the end to you all, after leading to a nail-biting-finish!π
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This is a timely story, Sabina. There’s good tension leading up to the cliffhanger. Good writing. π — Suzanne
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Great opening for a “spy thriller”.
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Thank you
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Exactly!π
Thanks!
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