Mom, come see. Look the trees are dipping silver threads!
Looks like your wish came true. Soon you will be able to use your new skates!
I’m so looking forward to it. Thank you God!
But I can’t go check those far shacks now.
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Mom, come see. There are icicles on the trees!
Oh no. My worst nightmare has come true. How are we going to manage!
They look pretty! Look on the bright side. They will be too busy skating to come and chase us out!
Hope so. Thank God for small mercies!
Dear Sabrina,
There are two sides to most stories, aren’t there? Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yes, they sure do Rochelle. Thank you!💐
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I liked the different perspectives.
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Both sides of the coin, and a poignant story.
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Thank you!💐
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Thank you. I tried to still maintain hope!☺
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Two scenes. Two families facing the same scenario. For one, its thrilling. For the other, its chilling. Literally!
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And they are connect!
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I loved the ‘trees dipping silver threads’ but after reading it twice I’m afraid I didn’t really understand what was going on.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Perspective! Perspective!
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Exactly! I didn’t want to put that in the title as I just wrote a piece called PERSPECTIVE PERCEPTION!
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Two differing points of view – well done in such a short story.
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Yep,!👍
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Thank you!💐
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Half filled or half empty… not quite the same.
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All in how you look at things… it’s a choice!
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Exactly!
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Thank you!
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Two stories in one. What a bargain! 😉
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There were two radically different viewpoints to this, Sabina. I’m glad it worked out well for both of them. Good writing. —- Suzanne
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Thank you
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